तुझे छूने से डरता हूँ (tujhe chuune se darta hoon)
तुझे देखा ही करता हूँ बस इसका ही मज़ा हाय जीने में
रेशमी रातों में आते है
तेरी ज़ुल्फ़ के नाग डस जाते है
ज़हरीली यादों में घुटता हूँ
रोज़ ही जीता हूँ मरता हूँ
जज़्बा-ए-दिल को समझा ही नहीं
बेताब नज़र को जाना ही नहीं
तेरे साथ ही चलता रहता हूँ
फ़िर भी मैं तनहा हूँ तनहा हूँ
tujhe dekhaa hi kartaa hoon, bas iskaa hi mazaa haaye jeene mein
reshmi raaton mein aate hain, terii zulf ke naag Das jaate hain
zahareelii yaadon mein GhuTtaa hoon, mai roz hi jeeta hoon, martaa hoon
jazbaa-e-dil ko samjhaa hi nahiin, betaab nazar ko jaanaa hi nahiin
tere saath hii chaltaa rehtaa hoon, phir bhi mai tanhaa hoon, tanhaaa hoon
Comments
the last para was excellent,i loved the last stanza very much.
What happened to your template? we are unable to see it.or is it only me?
tere saath hii chaltaa rehtaa hoon, phir bhi mai tanhaa hoon, tanhaaa hoon
waise to insaan bhid mein bhi tanha ho le aur nahi to phir akele mein bhi logon ke saath rahe - saaya jo saath de jaaye :)
Good work
cheers
@alapana - point taken :) the imagery of those lines is not exactly soothing/romantic! I think, it was a result of the thought process behind that poem itself. It alludes to something on the dark side..
no one complained before. Which browser are u using?
@dawn - duniyaa se duur yoon tanhaa hi mai chaluun :)
@dear friend, create a new blogger ID.. idiot doesnt suit u. Thanks buddy :)
@ajay, we share the same name. Saw your blog, liked the design. Thank you too :)
Aap to aur bhi shair ho gaye hain
kamal ho gaya
completely rocking hai ji beautiful hai ji!!!
Keep Smiling:-)
All d bst !!
Thanks for your appreciation :) I was away from blogging for sometime now.. Looks like, its going to be so for few more days atleast :(
Please do keep visiting and I hope to post something soon.. :))
reshmi raaton mein aate hain, terii zulf ke naag Das jaate hain
zahareelii yaadon mein GhuTtaa hoon, mai roz hi jeeta hoon, martaa hoon
Excellent, Love it !!!
jazbaa-e-dil ko samjhaa hi nahiin, betaab nazar ko jaanaa hi nahiin
tere saath hii chaltaa rehtaa hoon, phir bhi mai tanhaa hoon, tanhaaa hoon...
Wah... I love this one!