तेरी ज़ुल्फ़ों में (Teri zulfon mein)



(Original poetry by @kaunquest)

 तेरी ज़ुल्फ़ों में जड़े मोती है बारिश का ये पानी
मेरे अरमान लिए आया है बूंदों में ये पानी

Teri zulfon mein jaDe moti hai baarish ka ye paani
Mere armaan liye aayaa hai boondon mein ye paani..

Just something to fill the silence for now!


Comments

Aurora said…
nice line:))))))

but aage aur kyu nahi likha aapne
17 April, 2006 19:55
farhaN Nocturnal said…
Aap ka sher parh ker , sawaan ka manzar zehan per chee gya,

Rubaee(quartet) paish-e-khidmat hai,

Churalya hai bondoon nay
Chuppa ek raaz seenay main
Dya hai dukh hajr ko bas
Sawaan ke mahenay nay

____________HAJR
18 April, 2006 00:31
farhaN Nocturnal said…
Nazm ka ek band(quatret) paih-e-khidmat hai, sawaan ke hawalay se,

Howa gum, ufaq say noor
Chaya ghum ka baadl
Seyahee ban ke phela hai
Teree aankh ka kajl.

______ HAJR
19 April, 2006 15:28
Kaunquest said…
@megha, Thank u. aage likhna to hai kabhi, magar abhi to dil aalsii hogayaa.. aadat se majboor hai, kyaa kare

@farhan, aapne to is mehfil pe chaar chaand lagaa diyaa. Wah! Kisii ke gham pe aaj aasmaan ko ronaa aayaa hai..

Phir wohi saawan, phir wohi taDap,
naayaa hai andaaz aur naye alfaaz
daad kubool farmaayen
23 April, 2006 18:29
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