Sunday, April 23, 2006

Har jung mein fateh haasil

Har jung mein fateh haasil
nahin jashn mein khushi shaamil

shohrat ke liye raazi
muhobbat bhi to ik baazi
toD doonga teraa bhi dil
mai wafaa ke nahin kaabil

na dost na koii saathi
dushman bhi na koii baaki
taDpe to kisii kaa dil
kisii moD pe ho kaatil

kahaan chain se so paayaa
tere dar pe na ro paayaa
khudaa paak nahin ye dil
na de mujhe jahaan kaamil

- Kaunquest

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15 comments:

Dawn....सेहर said...

Tu dekh afsaane ka
na moond mod deewane ka
yehi to ek pal hai mohabbat ka
bas jata aur chale ja
yehi hai bewafayee ke raaste ka
dagar ka fikar ka mukaam ka
tu jeet jaaye ga ye jung
tu maan mera ye kehana sangdil
mere armanon ki kasam tujhe
tu bhi jeet jayega jung mein
na umeed rakh kisi qatil se
loot jaane ka naam hai mohabbat
mit jaane ka naam hai anjaam-e-mohabbat :)

CHeers buddy...
toD doonga teraa bhi dil
mai wafaa [b]ka[/b] nahin kaabil

this shd be ke dear...
amazing..I like ur poetry :)

Dawn....सेहर said...

it has to be moonh on the 2nd line dear sorry!

farhaN Nocturnal said...

BOHAT KHUB, KHAS KER YEH LINES,

Har jung mein fateh haasil
nahin jashn mein khushi shaamil

kahaan chain se so paayaa
tere dar pe na ro paayaa

na dost na koii saathi
dushman bhi na koii baaki

And important thing is that poem's rhythm is really nice.

farhaN Nocturnal said...

ek nazm likhee hai, arz kya hai,

NA TUM GUNGUNAO GAY
NA HUM GEET GAIN GAY
IS KHAMOSH MOHABBAT MAIN
LAMHE PHIR BEET JAIN GAY

NA TUM LO LAGAO GAY
NA HUM DEEP JALA-AIN GAY
IS WIRAN-E-SHAB MAIN
ANDHAIRAY JEET JAIN GAY

NA TUM GUNCHON KO POOJO GAY
NA HUM BULBUL SAA CHEKAIN GAY
IS UJAAR GULSHAN MAIN
BAS KAANTE HEE MEHKAIN GAY

NA TUM *KHATKHATAO GAY (*knock)
NA HUM QUFL LAGA-AIN GAY (qufl-lock)
IS MASOOM SE KHAFGEE MAIN
HUM EK-DOOJAY KO BHOOL JAA-AIN GAY

Sujata said...

Good one..:)

Alapana said...

I remember these lines which i read recently.

""jab bhii aankhon mein ashq bhar aaye,
log kuchh dubathe nazar aaye
muddatein ho gain sahar dekhe,
koi aahat koi Kabar aaye
chaand jitane bhii gum hue shab ke,
sabake ilzaam mere sar aaye
mujhako apnaa pataa Thikaanaa mile,
wo bhii ik baar mere ghar aaye"

Rambler said...

zah-e-naseeb, ki aap ko humaara blog pasand aaya. Aapke baare mein aapke blog par padha, aur yeh jaan kar bahut achcha laga ki aap harfon ke taane baane mein uljhe hue hain ... kahin aap kozhikode ke to nahin? wahan ke log ghazalon mein dilchaspi lete hain, mere kuchch dost bhi hain aise ... fir milenge ...

kaunquest said...

@dawn,
mazaa deTaa hai yoon miTnaa bhi, miTaanaa bhi, kyaa kare..
Fareb ko kehte hai muhobbat, vo bhi aur hum bhi, kyaa kare..

kaunquest said...

@dawn thanks for the correction.. is it 'ki' or 'ke'? I hope i have used it correctly. Sometimes I become like mohanlal in 'Gandhinagar IInd street', with my hindi :)

@farhan, Thanks buddy, always a pleasure to see your comments :)

kaunquest said...

@farhan, beautiful. Well written with simple words :) wah!

@Sujata, welcome here :) Thank u. Hope to see you around.

@alapana, a beautiful poem! Do u know who has written it? I particularly liked the 'chaand jitne bhi gum hai shab ke' line

@rambler, Hum bhi aapke shukr guzaar hai jo aap aaye aur chand lamhe yahaan bitaaye. I am not from kozhikode. Yes u r right, gazals are liked there very much.
My places are Kannur and Kochi.

Dawn....सेहर said...

Ur are fine with ka...no worries. :) I like MOhanlal...he is one of my favs :D..
Cheers

Raman Kaul said...

बहुत उमदा! "mai wafaa ki nahin kaabil" की जगह होना चाहिए "मैं वफ़ा के नहीं काबिल"।

kaunquest said...

@dawn, I have changed it to Ke.. :)

@Raman, many thanks.. is Ke, Ki, Ka ke chakkar mein bohath pareshaan hogayaa mai to :)
and welcome here.

Mazir Abbasi said...
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Mazir Abbasi said...

Har jung mein fateh haasil
nahin jashn mein khushi shaamil

very nice lines. and nice blog. people usually give up blogging after sometime but iam surprised to you the length of your activity on this portal.