बूंदों की दबी दबी हसी (Boondon ki dabii dabii hasii)

Here is a composition by a singer friend Sumi. Although, its her first attempt at composing, I think she has really lifted my lyrics with her creative touch.
music & vocals – Sumithra bhakthavatsalam Sumithra Bhakthavatsalam
Lyrics – Ajay Chandran (@kaunquest)
I look forward to your feedback

(Original poetry by @kaunquest)

boondon ki dabii dabii hasii
chat se sunaaaiii di
saawan mohe sataaye piyaa
ab to dikhaayi de

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sajti mai kis ke liye birhan
udaas lage mohe har darpan

ghar gumsum (hai), chup hai angnaa
teri aahat ko... tarse mann..tadpe mann..

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baadal garje to (mai) Dar jaaoon
bujhe jo diyaa to kaap uTuun
ratiyaan ratiyaan jaaGe nainaa
tum bin mai (to) na... so paauun... jee paauun..