पहलू में आज आपके (Pehloo mein aaj aap ke)


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(Original poetry by @kaunquest)
पहलू में आज आपके जो बेरंग होगये
कहते है गुल वो आप से महकाके जाईये

Pehloo mein aaj aapke jo berang hogaye
kehte hai gul wo aap se, mehkaake jaayiye

Comments

farhaN Nocturnal said…
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06 May, 2006 21:14
farhaN Nocturnal said…
Bohat umdaah, zabardast,daad qabool farmayee next couplet is,

*Gung hai *bad-e-saba zulfoon ko choom ke
lilah! kuch ab aap hi gungunayee

___HAJR

*gung--baffled
*bad-e-saba--morning breeze
06 May, 2006 21:16
Manish Kumar said…
kya bhai koi update nahin?
21 May, 2006 13:16
Kaunquest said…
@Farhan, sorry about the delay in response. Kaam mein kuch zyaadaa hi busy hoon aaj kal. Kyaa karun rozii kaa sawaal hai :)
Nice couplet :)

@megha, yoon hi muskuraate rahiyegaa

@Manish ji, Aur bhi hai gham zindagii mein, kyaa kare :)
Abhi to blogswara ka excitement hai :)
22 May, 2006 01:16
Anonymous said…
da, good to see that you are back doing what you do best!
good luck! - srijith
24 May, 2006 20:41
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