सितारों से बातें (sitaaron se baatein)

(Original poetry by @kaunquest)

दूर जाके वो खामोश बैठे रहे
और तारों से आँखें मिलाते रहे
सितारे तो समझे इशारे नहीं
उस ने आँखों में मेरी भी देखा नहीं

Door jaake vo khaamosh baiTe rahe
Aur taaron se aankhen milaate rahe
Sitaare to samjhe ishaare nahin
Us ne aankhon mein meri bhi dekhaa nahin...

Thanks to Murali for suggesting that I start using the standard transliteration scripts. I will certainly get around to doing that. I realize that my inconsistent scripting style causes difficulty for most readers. Please do bear with me until I get it right. (- Yes I have finally done it now, years later ;) )

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Comments

Dawn said…
Wah anokha andaaz laga ...dono hee ek dusre ke khayalon mein aur dono ko hee khabar nahi wah!!!

awesome
Princess said…
achi kavita hai.

Thanks for visiting my blog.
Kaunquest said…
@dawn, badi khushi hui ye sunke ke aapko ye pasand aaya

@aizwaikcha, welcome here.
ajay:

I have tuned this. I need you to extend this so that we can have a full song.