न नसीहत.. न मसीहाई (Na naseehat, na maseehaai)
(Original poetry by @kaunquest)
न नसीहत.. न मसीहाई.. न खुदाई केलिए..
हम तो तरसे थे आशनाई केलिए
न दे अब तू कोई वास्ता
न दिखा हमें कोई रास्ता
मुबारक तेरा खुदा तुम्हे
क़ुबूल यूं मिटना हमें
कायदे में रहे वो दिल नहीं
जूनून वो जिसकी हद नहीं
बेपाया ज़मीन और आसमान
चले क्यों हम कतार में
कहाँ शुरू हुआ सफर
है आगे कौन सी डगर
बेकरां जहान इक बूँद हम
बह जाएंगे यूं बेफिक्र
hum to tarse the aashnaai keliye
na de ab tu koi vaasta,
na dikhaa hamein koi raasta
mubaarak tera khudaa tumhe,
kubool yoon miTnaa hamen
kaide mein rahe woh dil nahin,
junoon woh jiski hadh nahin
be-paayaa zameen aur aasmaan,
chale kyon hum kataar mein
kahaan shuruu huaa safar,
hai aage kaun sii Dagar
be-karaan jahaan, ik boond hum,
beh jaayenge yoon befikar
-Kaunquest
(be-paaya = vast; be-karaan = limitless ocean)
If you liked this, please also read http://kaunquest.blogspot.com/2006/04/har-jung-mein-fateh-haasil.html
Comments
junoon woh jiska hadh nahin
Be-paayaa zameen aur aasmaan,
Chale kyon hum kathaar mein
Wha kya sahi farmaya hai...daad hee daad kabool farmayein janaaab....zhalke aapke kalam se aur jyada :)
cheers
Aap hi ke bol hain,Aur mulaaqaath ke liye kwaabon ki kya jaroorat ,yehaan, isi safar mein hogi,Humne apna Aashiyan badal diya,par dost nahi,rahe badalgayi lekin log wahi puraane milthe gaye,Tashreef laayiyega kabhi humaare naye aashiyane pe:)
unse miliye to khushi hoti hai unse mil kar
sheher ke duusre logon se jo kam jhoothein hain :)
Kahaan shuruu huaa safar,
hai aage kaun see Dagar
be-karaan jahaan, ik boond hum,
beh jaayenge yoon befikar
waqai bahut khoob!
had aur dagar feminine gender hain isliye junoon woh jiski hadh nahin aur hai aage kaun see dagar jyada upyukta rahega.
Btw, I heard your rendition of "Khamoshi" the other day, but did not get time to comment there. You have a fabulous voice, my friend, and the poetry is mindblowing!
is it written by u?
@alapana, aap ka yoon laut aana achaa lagaa.. aapke naye aashiyaane mein hum aayenge zaroor..
@oxy_moron, shukriya.. sahi farmaaya janaab..
@manish, thanks buddy. hindi/urdu not being my mother tongue is certainly a disadvantage. I try to proof read before I post, i guess I forgot this time. I will correct it.
@arundhati, you dissappeared for a few days. Glad to see that u are back in action. Thanks for that.. I will do some more audio posts soon.
@megha, welcome here. Yes, its all my own poetry. Glad to know you liked it. Please keep visiting.
Send me a devanagari version of the lyrics if possible. I have tuned this song already.