जीने का एहद (Jeene ka ehadh)
कभी सीने में धड़क बनाके रखा हमने तुम्हे
कभी अश्क़ों में तड़प बनाके रखा हमने तुम्हे
मेरी आह की गर्मी
मेरे लैब पे रुका हुआ वो नाम
नग्मों की घनक
ख्वाबों की महक
जीने का एहद
बनाके रखा हमने तुम्हे
Kabhi seene mein dhaDak banaake rakha humne tumhe
Kabhi ashqon mein thaDap banaake rakha humne tumhe
Meri aah ki garmi, Mere lab pe ruka hua vo naam,
Nagmon ki ghanak, Kwaabon ki mehak,
Jeene ka ehad, banaake rakha humne tumhe..
photo credit Christian Wiediger
Comments
Didnt get this sentence....wht does it mean??
all d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)
lagta hai v-day ke uplaksh mein yeh saamne aaya hai ;)
well written!
GBU
khudaa kare aapki yeh dua asar kar jaaye...
Kabhi ik kithaab likhe hum aur aap ko nazar kar jaaye..
I am glad that if I ever write a book, atleast one copy will get sold! and so maybe someday, I will. Thanks a lot :)
@emotions, Thank u! Keep visiting and I will keep writing :)
Isii deewaangi ke hum deewane hai..
@Manish, This should have been a V-day post, but was very busy this week. :) Thank u
and hope all of u had a great valentines day.
Thanks for dropping by pal !!
Uhhmmm if i were to comment on your poems i would rather be quiet. cus its beyond words.
Everytime i read something like this i am lost in time..... a place where nothing else exists but all those memories.... and i sit and smile to myself...until i am banged it reality yet again.....
Thanks for being such a amazing poet.....and i bet you have an equally amazing and pure heart.
Take care
God Bless !!
Shals
Thanks for the reply...
nice poem :)
Jeene ke kayee bahane dhunde hain logone
Kuch dekar guzar jaane ki ada bahut khoob lagi humein ;)
bahut khoob....daad farmate hain....
Cheers
@shals, glad to see you here after a long time. keep visiting.
@zoonie, thank u
@dawn, shukriyaa
@komal, sure, will do :)