tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7531467.post1974115825030257546..comments2023-09-15T22:18:45.336+00:00Comments on Bikhre Lamhe: Jaadoogari nigaah kiKaunquesthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07008368770709804894noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7531467.post-70513536730993548172009-04-27T12:57:00.000+00:002009-04-27T12:57:00.000+00:00hi
u had left a comment on my blog quite sometim...hi<br /> u had left a comment on my blog quite sometime back, thnks, this is not the right place to say this but thnks again :)Bhuvanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03323895814409278969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7531467.post-19062328063208140232008-12-06T01:31:00.000+00:002008-12-06T01:31:00.000+00:00Ajay, I am always mesmerized by the imagination of...Ajay, I am always mesmerized by the imagination of poets. You have some nice ideas in this song (poem).<BR/><BR/>One issue I notice is that of weight (wazan). In Urdu poetry, wazan makes quite a bit of difference. I see the first sher is getting slightly out of weight.<BR/><BR/>For example, "aaye hai hosh mein abhi, abhi to na jaayiye" would be in wazan as "aye abhi hain hosh mein, abhi na jaiyeeZEG Consultantshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03684929957482142365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7531467.post-45432750062877666052008-11-15T12:41:00.000+00:002008-11-15T12:41:00.000+00:00Ur blog is very nice...http://hotspicywallpapers.b...Ur blog is very nice...<BR/><BR/>http://hotspicywallpapers.blogspot.com/<BR/><BR/>http://shayrionline.blogspot.com/<BR/><BR/>http://mobileflame.blogspot.com/Sachin Malhotrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13488814894291573420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7531467.post-17152607243801420002008-11-13T00:20:00.000+00:002008-11-13T00:20:00.000+00:00Aise hi roz aaiye, khyaal bataate jaaiye (i mean c...Aise hi roz aaiye, khyaal bataate jaaiye (i mean comment chodkar jaaiye ;-) ).<BR/><BR/>Did not follow line no. 7: jugnuu khayaal-e-yaar ke, apne chiraag haiSumahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18236139258641144675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7531467.post-3771074057827273342008-10-31T10:37:00.000+00:002008-10-31T10:37:00.000+00:00hey this couplet is really awesome...very filmy! :...hey this couplet is really awesome...very filmy! :)<BR/><BR/>thanx for all your comments on my blog...<BR/><BR/>do excuse me for delayed replies.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7531467.post-84223914318412492782008-09-20T13:41:00.000+00:002008-09-20T13:41:00.000+00:00Nice song !!!Nice song !!!Ankihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08218285777849560899noreply@blogger.com