Sunday, August 03, 2008

Har baat ka

Har baat ka,
koii doosraa
maainaa hogaa..

vo jis cheez se
dartaa haii bohat,
aainaa hogaa..

3 comments:

Shalz said...

hmm... good one. Simple ... and yet carries a lot of meaning.

aaina jo dikhati hai sach...
mushkil is sah ko nibhana hoga...

kar degi bayaan wo saari batein,
jisko chupana na-mumkin hoga...

phir ek shaam aisi aaye,
jab yaddon me unki kho jan hoga....


Hows that ??? looks like i have taken a cue.. dont blame me if thats sounds very bland... i just gave it a shot. first time at shayari/poetry ( totaly risking my sanity.

keep writing buddy....

kaunquest said...

Not bad at all! :) Good attempt. If you work on it, I am sure you can make it even better. So keep writing!

OneLifeToRide said...

kya baat hai.. !!