Wednesday, November 08, 2006

raftaar-e-zindagii

raftaar-e-zindagii is tarah baDii
kaaboo mein kuch nahiin, manzoor bekhudii

har Dor ko mai choDke
gir jaaon aasmaan toDke
aa gale lagaa mujhe
haath baDaa tuu pyaar se
sar zameen e zindagiii..
sar zameen e zindagiii

ik jaam aag se bhar ke do mujhe
zindaan mein barf kii kaid kar mujhe

zehreeley hont laa zaraa
maut paas tuu aa zaraa
aa gale lagaa mujhe
mujhko miTaa tuu shauq se
miTaa zaraa yoon bebasiii...
miTaa zaraa yoon bebasiii

- to life & to death

5 comments:

Dawn....सेहर said...

Amazing sequel I must say with life and death at the same time :)...aajkal raftaar-e-zindagii kuch aisa hee rang la rahi hai and hence I wrote a poetry on my hindi blog too...jo raftaar per hee kuch rang chidakti hai:)
good work ...keep it up dear
Cheers

Arz000n said...

Awww man...
Poem on life and dead is nicely put down in words here.

zehreeley hont laa zaraa
maut paas tuu aa zaraa
aa gale lagaa mujhe
mujhko miTaa tuu shauq se

but dunno why...am not having a good feeling afta reading these lines :(

illusion said...

Gosh! one can never make out that the writer is someone hailing from south where hindi, urdu, gazal and kavya seem to be alien (conventionally). nice write up.

Yeah, same template...and thanks for the visit.
happy blogging!

educatedunemployed said...

Wow, I like the changed template.Here after a long time.

Still comprehending the mood of the poem.

kaunquest said...

sorry all for the late response.
Thanks Dawn! :) i visited your blog too, good poem.

arzOOOn, Aap yahaan aage mehfil to raushan hogaya.. Thanks for visiting! agree, not the most positive theme :)

Thanks illusion :) see ya around

edu, so u have left UK! and guess u r no longer unemployed ;) It was just a spark of thought which shaped into this one!