Tuesday, February 21, 2006

Zaraa to aankh nam karo

Kaatil nahin tu meraa rehnumaa hai
Pareshaan hoon, tere talwaar pe kyon lahuuu meraa hai...

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Zaraa to aankh nam karo,
jahaan ki baat kam karo
Bewafaaa hamein zaraa,
pyaar se khatam karo

Beshumaar daulat guroor ki,
lutaayii jo tum ne shauq se
karzaa karzaa chukaayaa tha,
hum ne bhi dil ko jalaaya tha

Bas leTe rahoge farsh pe,
dariyaaa bahenge ashk ke
Chale aayenge wohi tairne,
Woh tinke hamaari yaad ke

Ghabraa gaye kya tum zaraa,
Is bujhti lau ki taDap se
Hum tanhaa hi bheeg jaayenge
rusvaai ki barsaat mein

6 comments:

Manish said...

Wow!! man what a poet...
really beautiful stuff...
bas laga ki dil ne khaie hai koi chot... isiliye dard aaya hai bhahar... leke ek kavita ka aakaar...
:)
GBU

Dawn....सेहर said...

Qatil nahin tu mera rehnuma hai
Pareshaan hoon, tere talwaar pe kyon lahuuu mera hai...

Wallah!!! sher bahut hee khub hai...!
nazm mein bhi bewafayee ki gehari chot aur dard ko bhi khub darshaya hai...lafzon ka istemaal sahi hei lekin...kheen 'h' ke aajane se...malayalee chova :) mehasus hota hei...
otherwise an awesome poetry....daad hee daad kabool karein...
cheers

Mystique said...

I have to agree with Sehar. It's beautifully written and very evocative emotionally.

Neetika said...

Maar hi daaloge!!
Wah wah kya baat hai hujoor ki
Apni shayri se dil chura liya
Lagta hain aapne bahut choot khai hai
Take care
Keep smiling

kaunquest said...

Folks, Thanks ever so much for your kind comments. sorry for the delay in replying

@manish, thoDi bebasi na ho agar, to bekhudi bhi kyaa hai. :)

@dawn, Thank u. Malayalee chova?? Not intentional though!

@mystique, Thank u. idhar aathe rahiyegaa, aap jaise meharbaanon se hi to is mehfil mein rang hai

@neetika, aisi thaareef se to hum bhi mar jaaye :) One should touch on every emotion, and dard is always good for poetry. hai ki nahin...

Murali said...

tuned this too man :)